Friday, April 3, 2009

Narrative: Body Paragraphs

As I run back to my room, in disappointment, I jump onto my top bunk and hide under the blankets. I sat there, and sat. I would say about 2 hours or so went by that seemed like eternity! “It’s seven o’clock by now; I am so waking everyone up!” I thought. So I jumped out of my bed all pumped and excited for the morning ahead. I woke up my heavily snoring brother. “IT’S CHRISTMAS!” I yelled. Of coarse that made him excited so we both ran to the other side of our trailer where my mom and step dad lay hibernating. “GET UP, GET UP, GET UP!!!!” jumping on them and screaming we finally got them up. “What time is it now?” They mumbled. “It’s seven, wake up now, can’t you see Christmas is waiting for us?!” They dragged there lazy butts up and we walked a few small steps to the living room.

“Oh, my, gosh, the most presents I have ever seen!” I was sure they were popping out at us! There were presents everywhere, on the couch, on the T.V, on the table, on the floor. Our tree was very small, crooked, trashy, but cute with little lights and a bow on top. It was only about a foot tall, but we had that forever, it was tradition. As me and my brother start opening our presents we try all our clothes, toys, candy out. “This is the best Christmas ever, thank you!” Dairien, my brother, was being silly and trying on my princess shoes and dresses while I played with his play gun. We were there hours just playing and opening presents! We also pigged out on donuts and sugar, that’s just what we do on Christmas.

So by now we were full of candy and playing when all the sudden, “Where’s my dad!?” My mom just sat there for a second in concern. Kind of like she was worried he wasn’t going to come again and my world would be crushed. You would think by now I wouldn’t expect anything from him but for some reason he was my hero. My mom comes to me and says, “He will be here don’t worry baby, soon, just be patient.” I ran

Kesha

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

God it just kills me to read about and know how much pain you've been through. I just don't understand how parents can be such punks. How could you leave someone as amazing as you! Well all i know is that you have become one amazing and strong girl. you are definitely going places!

alex

james said...

WOW... Kesha this is amazing you did a great job... I'm sorry your dad wasn't the best... my dad didn't come into my life until i got put in D.T. it hurt me pretty bad when he didn't show up for birthdays, or anything special. I'm glad you got a good Christmas though. i almost started to cry when i read this post that is how good i thought it was. i hope that you're life turns out the way you want it to...


James M.

P.S. You're AWSOME!!!=)