Friday, April 3, 2009

Narrative: Body Paragraphs

She told me I was going to get registered in a high school. I was devastated. I couldn’t believe that I would have to be going to a school with immature teenagers. It was bad enough that I was starting late in the year, but I also had no idea who these people were. She told me that I would be going to Lone Peak High School for the rest of my high school years.

We went into Lone Peak to the front office. The whole place was huge. I knew I could get so lost in this school. Then, the bell rang, and all these people started pouring out of the classes. I was immediately aware that this was a total prep school. I was right in assuming that I didn’t know anyone there. Everyone was staring at me like I was some foreign, giant insect that they had never seen before.

I was taken to a room where this lady told me what papers I needed before I could enroll. I went and told my mom and she said that we would have to go to a different school to get those. We headed to Orem to get them, at a school called Summit. I recognized the name because my brother and sister used to go there. They had always told me how fun it was, so I was interested in seeing what it looked like. When we pulled off the freeway, I had no idea what was in store for me.

When we got to Summit High School, we were told to go to Dan’s office. We went in and told him about our situation with the papers. He told us that he would need to be contacted by my caseworker and my judge before he could release them. I liked Dan so far. Then, my mom suggested something. She suggested that I start going to Summit.


-Aubri

5 comments:

Nena said...

wow that was interesting to know how you came here. i think it was well written.

Dani said...

This is very well explained. I think it's funny in the beginning how you explain how you were in high school. I like how you write.
Dani

trevorj said...

it was intesting on how you came to summit.

trevorj said...

it was intesting on how you came to summit.

Anonymous said...

thats so true that is such a prep school i am happy you came to summit and great writing.
jake per 1