Compassion
By: Rachel
Compassion is a feeling that everyone
Feels at least one time in their lives
It is the trust you feel with someone close
And you wouldn’t need to question them
Or yourself
You feel the pain coming from someone you love
All these events can be an emotional tug
The power that ONE individual can bring
It makes the person you’re helping want to sing
Praises and joys of how you’ve saved,
Everything they’ve ever gained.
To care and to love is what this word means
To help and to rescue what you’ve seen
Not to feel sorry for them,
But to make them think again
9 comments:
Wow Rachel! This shows a lot of emotion. I like it.
i really liked your poem and i think that its really true
ben
wow i really like your poem your good at that.
TY
very good , you have a way with words
llike it alot
austin
This poem is one of my favorites, and i am not just saying that. I can relate to this poem so much and its so true.:)
Nick P (1)
I really like this poem, if only more people would apply this to there life then the world could be more bare able.
Mark
i agree with most of it. because if the person you're helping doesn't give a crap then what do you do. i think it was good but you could go deeper (i think so at least).
james
I like how you expressed yourself good poem.-Noble
its good that you can understand what compassion is about. because most people dont know how to act or treat one another in a relationship.
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