Friday, March 27, 2009

Narrative Introduction

Starting a new school

Have you ever had mixed emotions about something? Well when we were entering into the school year, I was told that I could do home schooling. I was so excited that I wouldn’t have to go to a high school. I went for almost three weeks just doing simple home school. I had a lot of fun because since I am really good at school, it didn’t take me long to get done with my assignments. Then I could basically do whatever I wanted to do.

The day was supposed to be simple when I got up at seven to help get my brothers and sisters off to school, like usual. After they were all gone, my mom told me to get cleaned up. It was strange, but I didn’t ask why. When we were in the car, I finally asked where we were going. She said she was going to get me registered, so naturally, I asked what I was being registered for. I waited for a while for an answer, and then we pulled into the parking lot of a building. She said something I had dreaded she would say.

Aubri

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

i like how you started your introdutcion

Anonymous said...

I really like how you started your introduction of the paper. what i think you should do to change your writing is by adding a little less detail in an into.

Tayler

Anonymous said...

A great way to start a narrative, full of suspense and foreshadowing. it makes me want to know what is going to happen next.

Nick B

Anonymous said...

I think you did a really good job and being really descriptive on how you were feelings and what the outcome could be. I'm really glad that you came to Summit though and I got a chance to meet and be friends with you. Awesome job!

~Rachel