Friday, March 20, 2009

I miss your gorgeous green and blue eyes
Your beautiful bright radiant smile
Missing your soft touch and gentle voice
It’s true what they say love is bliss

Without you I feel so cold and lonely
I need your warm gentle touch
I wish I could hold you in my arms
Without you I feel so vain

Torn away from you and torn a sunder
I’m in a blunder I feel so lost
Closing my eyes trying not to give up
I’m caught in the dark and you’re my light

They can only separate us for so long
Soon I’ll kiss your soft cheek
Soon I’ll hold you in my arms
‘Cause your what makes my heart beat


Sarah

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

i really liked your poem it was really great!!!
i know what its like to have people try to separate you from who you want to be with.

Breaunna

Anonymous said...

i like your poem is pretty good good job!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

It would be interesting to know whom you speak of.
It sounds like you remember their features very well.

LOL
Anthony

Anonymous said...

Love is a great topic to write about, or the lack thereof. Keep writing about what moves you.

Nick B.

Anonymous said...

Oh wow very good poem. I really liked it. I heard somewhere that like 85 percent of poems and songs are about love. I can't write poems but you can. Very good!

-Kesha :)