“Zach?” “Wake up you need to get ready, we will be in the car”. “Ugh” I thought to myself as I dragged myself up out of my warm bed. This is the only day I don’t want to see her. “I have to” I kept telling myself, if I don’t I’ll never get over it. By this time I was heading down the hall which seemed so long with its tiled floor and white walls, seems like I was walking to a death sentence, I sure felt like it. Today would be the first day I would see her family in almost a month. By now my nerves were so rattled that my palms were sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy. I walk outside eating a piece of toast that was on the counter, probably old but I didn’t care. I didn’t want to care or feel anything today. I get in my car its cold just like everything else today. I knew this but sat right against the cold leather seats and just sat there. My eyes were welling up with tears. “Not now” I said to myself “Not yet”. I started my car it finally turned over after a few tries. “Piece of crap Toyota” I said out loud. I started driving out of the driveway, that’s when it happened. That’s when I saw it.
Zach
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Cool... Sounds interesting can't wait to hear more dude... I agree warm cozy beds are hard to get out of.
james
wow dude that is really good! you had me hooked right off the bat! good job bro!
alex
That sounds so cool i want to read the rest so hurry and write it.
TY
wow this sounds like it will be good!!!
cant wait....
what did you see...
Breaunna
Zach this is good i can see what your trying to say and it is a good way to put it in the way you put it.
Landon
wow...It's pretty intense. I really liked how you put so much emotion behind it.-Noble
i know how that feels to have to face something you have been avoiding but i dont know what i can critic on it was out standing great job!-kirra
that was cool. like it. good job.
wow are you serious im just kidding but you look like your doing good just keep it up and make your story a little longer next time.
Landon
what happens?!?!?!
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