Friday, March 20, 2009

There once was a mouse,
Who lived in a house.
He did not speak,
Nor did he speak.
But he did wear a blouse.

There once was a boy
He loved his favorite toy
He found it broken
After he awoken
And just found out it was his brother troy.

There once was a bum
He played the drum
He found it was bad
He got very mad
And he told himself he’s dumb

I wish to have a phone
Maybe I can get a lone.
Should I get cricket?
Or kick back and kick it.
But all I do is mone.


Tayler

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice poem i like it

Anonymous said...

The first rhyme is kind of weird, the second seems more like a grudge, the third seems comical, and the fourth is also kind of weird.

Anthony

Anonymous said...

I really like your poems but try to get into a differant rhyme scheme. like instead of AA, BB, CC, DD, etc. mix it up. Good poem though.

-Kesha :)